Hey, bud. This is pretty bad. I can't quite make a good 'character' of you. I don't mean that you're a bad protagonist or anything, but anything I make of you won't be exactly you if you know what I'm saying. Could you maybe make a page or more of the next part where I left off. Just to see if that would be a better take of what I've written as your first appearances in the school. That would be cool to see your writing. What do you say?